Merge pull request #396 from apezio/master

touching up the wording on the main page

index.html

@@ -20,9 +20,7 @@ Title: Home
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                             <h1 id="main-h1">Monero</h1>
                             <h2 id="main-h2">Private Digital Currency</h2>
-                            <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only 
+                            <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.</p>
-                            you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts 
-                            and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.</p>
                             <p><a href="/get-started/using/" class="btn-link btn-auto btn-primary">Get Started</a></p>
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@@ -40,7 +38,7 @@ Title: Home
                     <div class="row middle-xs info-block-row private">
                         <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-8 col-xs-12  why-text">
                             <h3>Monero is secure.</h3>
-                            <p>Monero is a decentralized cryptocurrency, meaning it is extremely difficult to hack and steal your funds. Transactions are confirmed by distributed consensus, and then immutably recorded on the blockchain. Third-parties do not need to be trusted to keep your Monero safe. </p>
+                                <p>Monero is a decentralized cryptocurrency, meaning it is secure digital cash operated by a network of users. Transactions are confirmed by distributed consensus, and then immutably recorded on the blockchain. Third-parties do not need to be trusted to keep your Monero safe. </p>
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                         <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-4 col-xs-12 last-sm first-xs center-xs">
                             <img src="/img/secure-monero.png" alt="Secure safe" class="main-icon">
@@ -52,7 +50,7 @@ Title: Home
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                         <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-8 col-xs-12 why-text">
                             <h3>Monero is private.</h3>
-                            <p>Monero uses ring signatures and ring confidential transactions to obfuscate the amounts, origins, and destinations of all transactions. Monero gains all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the standard privacy concessions. </p>
+                            <p>Monero uses ring signatures and ring confidential transactions to obfuscate the amounts, origins, and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions. </p>
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@@ -155,7 +153,7 @@ Title: Home
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                                 <h2>Moneropedia</h2>
-                                <p class="main-resources">Would you like to look up the meanings of the terms and concepts used in Monero? Here you will find an alphabetical list of terms and their meanings from both the Monero and Kovri projects.</p>
+                                <p class="main-resources">Would you like to look up the meanings of the terms and concepts used in Monero? Here you will find an alphabetical guide to terms and their meanings from both the Monero and Kovri projects.</p>
                                 <p><a href="/resources/moneropedia/" class="btn-link btn-auto">Read Moneropedia</a></p>
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@@ -169,7 +167,7 @@ Title: Home
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                                 <h2>User Guides</h2>
-                                <p class="main-resources">Step-by-step guides to all things Monero are separated by category and cover everything from creating a wallet, recovering a wallet, and even how to edit this website.</p>
+                                <p class="main-resources">Step-by-step guides to all things Monero are separated by category and cover everything from creating a wallet to supporting the network, and even how to edit this website.</p>
                                 <p><a href="/resources/user-guides/" class="btn-link btn-auto">Read user guides</a></p>
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