From 40771db30f9c4bcaf3927f8b94ef637e008432b8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: robby-dermody <robbyd@u20.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 00:23:29 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] update open paragraph wording for new i18n site

---
 _i18n/en/index.md       | 4 ++--
 _i18n/template/index.md | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_i18n/en/index.md b/_i18n/en/index.md
index 266200cc..b49dd961 100644
--- a/_i18n/en/index.md
+++ b/_i18n/en/index.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
                         <div class="main-info">
                             <h1 id="main-h1">Monero</h1>
                             <h2 id="main-h2">Private Digital Currency</h2>
-                            <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.</p>
+                            <p id="main-text">Monero is cash for a connected world. It’s fast, private, and secure. With Monero, you are your own bank. You can spend safely, knowing that others cannot see your balances or track your activity.</p>
                             <p><a href="{{site.baseurl}}/get-started/using/" class="btn-link btn-auto btn-primary">Get Started</a></p>
                         </div>
                     </div>
@@ -187,4 +187,4 @@
         </section>
         
         <!-- END 3 ONE-THIRD BLOCKS ROW -->
-</div>
\ No newline at end of file
+</div>
diff --git a/_i18n/template/index.md b/_i18n/template/index.md
index ad0774aa..9589e09a 100644
--- a/_i18n/template/index.md
+++ b/_i18n/template/index.md
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
                         <div class="main-info">
                             <h1 id="main-h1">Monero</h1>
                             <h2 id="main-h2">Private Digital Currency</h2>
-                            <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.</p>
+                            <p id="main-text">Monero is cash for a connected world. It’s fast, private, and secure. With Monero, you are your own bank. You can spend safely, knowing that others cannot see your balances or track your activity.</p>
                             <p><a href="{{site.baseurl}}/get-started/using/" class="btn-link btn-auto btn-primary">Get Started</a></p>
                         </div>
                     </div>
@@ -188,4 +188,4 @@
         </section>
         
         <!-- END 3 ONE-THIRD BLOCKS ROW -->
-</div>
\ No newline at end of file
+</div>